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My(hopefully) entry to the Summer Contest by Daily Literature Deviations. Read more about the contest here: [link]

Word count: 2080 according to OpenOffice.

What's there to say about this piece? Seems to follow the typical dark theme that dominates my short stories. Oh well. Hope it works :)
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The Stone by ~Balaria ( Suggested by LiliWrites and Featured by thorns )
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Karinta Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Whoa.... gripping.
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Balaria Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Happy to hear you liked it :)
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really nice piece! Very dark but enjoyably so and you set up a nice bit of tension with "the choice".

Good work!
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Balaria Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My short ones seem to have a tendency to be dark, some perhaps overly so. Glad to hear it was balanced here.

Thank you for the comment :)
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome!
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AidanValentine01 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
I love this!
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Balaria Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Glad to hear you loved it :)
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Absent-Minds Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
completely awesome. and muy unique
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Balaria Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. Makes me happy to hear you liked it :)
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Nickystar101 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
The opening and closing of this is just absolutly atounding!
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