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This is an little side project of mine. It's something I dig up when I have absolutely nothing else to do and have already written the daily quota for my main work. So..don't expect to see new chapters often, but they'll be coming eventually and the story will be finished.

I believe a lot of the story will come down to character interaction and I hope I've managed to pull it off to start things off. I'd be happy to hear any thoughts you'd have on that.

All other comment are also welcome as usual.

Chapter 2: fav.me/d5jtxlm
Link to the gallery with all chapters: balaria.deviantart.com/gallery...
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Given 2013-07-25
He Who Seeks - Chapter 1 by ~Balaria is witty, well-developed science fiction. ( Featured by neurotype )
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Brii333 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is fascinating. I love the mystery and the air of futuristic dystopia that you've pulled together.
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BasicVanilla Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow I loved this~ I must go read the rest in my spare time ^^
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Balaria Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear it. Have fun reading :)
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Pogateun Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very well written! It's very detailed and as a reader I can absolutely see the steady relationship building between Hermes and Travis. I also love how you slowly reveal each character's characteristic because it makes the story a worthwhile read and brings different perspectives to your story~! A well deserved DD and keep up the awesome work!
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Balaria Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you like the rest of the story as well :)
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Aristeides Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I rarely enjoy pieces like this, but you did a remarkable job :) It was a pleasure to read! Thank you.
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Balaria Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear you liked it. Hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters as much :)
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Aristeides Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you again.
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THEAltimate Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i want to fav this jsut for the fact tht i can scroll through it lol
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Balaria Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I tend to write things pretty long. I hope you liked it for others reasons too :)
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