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Glad to hear you enjoyed the story
You might also enjoy one of my other stories, which got a DD the next day. Similar sort of dark story: [link]
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I noticed a few errors in this that I suspect might have been introduced while editing (where one word doesn't quite agree with the next, etc.). If you fancy going over this one more time, it might be worth it: but wait a while first so you don't just read what you remember writing. Easily worthy of a mention for the contest though, I think.
The ending was desperately sad though.
I enjoyed reading nonetheless